Short Poem of Mine.

while i'm having insomnia yesterday night, I thought of this short poem.

"Sky High"

"I gape upon the big blue sky,

Staring those jumbo jets flying high,

Wishing one day that i could fly,

To achieve this ambitious dream of mine.

Now that i'm flying high,

But not as high as jumbo jet could fly.

No matter how high am i,

Flying is the utmost joy of my life."

What you think about it? does it sounds weird?
do leave some comments, thanks =)